I don't know Final Fantasy so I cannot comment on the characters' looks, but it is a sweet scene. The lighting is the best part of the drawing; made and represented very well. The clothes are great too. The only imperfection I see is the characters' hair; has a slightly unfinished look. Some people said the girl's neck looks a bit awkward, but I find nothing weird about it, looks a natural pose to me. Overall, it is a nice drawing.
Adoro *ç*
very nice clothes and coloring